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    This was really cute. A pretty good VN. The visuals were definitely a strong point. I appreciated the characters changing outfits, and the painted backgrounds were very nice (although colors were a bit muddy at times).
    I found the writing a little weak at times, often explaining something that was already clear from the visuals (like it being morning). If something can/already is being told visually there usually is no need to write it.
    Unfortunately, I also had trouble feeling attached to to the characters, especially Pierce. I think just a little more time spent with them would have helped.
    Overall, good job! This is an ambitious project, and it was very well executed! Keep it up!

    waffrus responds:

    Yeahhh, I think my writing is my weakest point, haha.
    But thanks, glad you liked it. <:

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